ALWAYS, NEVER
Let him go,
Always let him go.
Suffer edict; irresistible you will be.
You love him more,
More than you believe he will ever.
Days and nights pass,
Seasons, years may pass;
the day
Will dawn;
His path determined – unable to let you go.
You will know, you will KNOW –
Do the winds direct?
Are you ready?
If so,
It’s time,
Time to dive into the Abyss,
Both feet, hands,
More so the heart and head.
Never look back, never doubt;
He will KNOW and treasure you the more;
Up or down, bad and good.
The love you give
Will be but a shred,
A mere star in the galaxy of his ardor.
Never look back, never doubt.
Silently taught by you, Mom and Dad;
Lived by me,
Passed down to Russell and Rachel
– debi
There are some really great inspirational elements in this poem
You have a wonderful creative streak!
I like your site.
Debi You have a wonderful insight into life. thank you for sharing your gift.
Thank you, Phyl.
Never look back, never doubt……Inspiritional and beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you,
Your poem is amazing.
It seems like you have an open mind..
lovely entry.
Thanks for sharing!
Thank you,
An open mind is a compliment of immense proportions.
I love to learn and explore new things: sciences, philosophies, arts…
But a lesson that changes the soul is the best kind of learning.
wow. i am in awe. this is powerful and so inspiring. the thoughts you evoke. awesome piece here.
http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2010/09/27/on-a-bed-of-winter/
Thank you for stopping by.
Beautiful words, love the shape of the poem as well as its words and wisdom.
The Lonely Recluse.
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed.
Touching and heartfelt. And a lovely tribute at the end.
Thank you,
They are such true words and determine the course of my life to a large extent.
I really like the rhythm and rhyme of this poem.
Thank you,
Your poem is excellent and sad.
‘The love you give Will be but a shred, A mere star in the galaxy of his ardor…’ – such beautiful lines that takes the reader on another level…Thanks for sharing. 🙂
Thank you for visiting.
I like how this poem reflects on the positive influences that remain with us…such a positive and uplifting write.
You are more than mere mortal.
Looking at your site, I’d say you are a gifted wordsmith.
I feel inspired after reading this poem, lovely!
Thank you so much!
love how you capture these moments.. here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
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Very fresh piece. I can feel the lesson learned.
Happy Rally
http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/01/13/dependent/
Thank you for your kind words.
congrats on your perfect poet award wk 36.. here’s mine for this thursday again huwee!.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
Thank you!
beautiful and inspirational 🙂
Thank you for visiting and your kind words.
Inspirational and beautiful 🙂 Loved it !
Thank you so much.
I liked your words also.
Wow… thoughts were very nicely illustrated here, Im glad I cam to read your post, loved it.
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Beautiful poem. Even its shape is lovely! Inspirational words and so true.
Such a difficult task–to let go of a child or anyone we love. Nicely expressed, Debi.
My rally: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/01/14/january-in-the-desert-jingles-poetry-rally/
Thanks mom and dad 🙂 :p They sure do know best and are right again
This is a very nicely and emotionally wrought poem. I totally enjoyed it. YOU ROCK!!! AWESOME!! THANK YOU! 🙂
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Thank you!
I enjoyed yours too.
Wonderful mood creator.
Thank you for your beautiful words
Happy Tuesday, return favor to those poets who are here yet you did not reach them initially…
I am saying these to all poets, hope that you take it rationally…
thanks for the support.
Have been and will continue!
There’s an aura about this poem that captured me from the start! Well done.
Thank you for visiting and your kind words!
My sweet friend. Love you.
I love you too!